Archetypal Characters Essay
by Alan Zheng
Submission date: 14-Feb-2018 05:42PM (UTC-0800)
Submission ID: 916195189
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FINAL GRADE
40/50
Archetypal Characters Essay
GRADEMARK REPORT
GENERAL COMMENTS
Instructor
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pronoun/antecedent agreement
pronoun/antecedent must agree
pronoun/antecedent agreement
pronoun/antecedent must agree
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Unclear:
When making a point in one of your body paragraphs, one of the most common mistakes is to
not of f er enough details. A paragraph without much detail will seem vague and sketchy. A paper
is always strengthened when your claims are as specif ic as possible, The more detailed
evidence you of f er, the more ref erence points your reader will have. Remember that you are
communicating your argument to a reader who has only your description to go by. Someone
who reads your essay will not automatically know what you mean to express, so you have to
supply details, to show the reader what you mean, not just tell him or her.
capitalize
capitalize
Awk.
Awkward:
The expression or construction is cumbersome or dif f icult to read. Consider rewrit ing.
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Additional Comment "an individual" is singular so the pronoun is singular(not they)
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