Esyn kaleohano
Period.4
Ching
2/20/19
The Giver vs our Modern Society
What do you think it is better to live in The Giver or Our modern society? I would live in our society because The giver is way different than our modern society .They both have similar things in common. The differences is the Giver is an utopian society. The similarities differences involve rules land how babies are born how they sit at the table and eat with their families. If you think they are different you are wrong because they both have things in common.
In our modern society our government is not the same as the givers government because of the way they act and the rules that apply. Everybody in the giver has a bedtime every day. They are also given a job due to the governments choice of your experience. They have cameras all along the park. To make sure that the rules are being followed by everyone.
In the givers modern society there government is handle way different than our modern society Because there is one rule that the government has is that you never do anything that can make anyone uncomfortable. Like in our society the government does not have that as one of the rules. Majority of the rules the giver has to do with making people conform. Jonas describes the admistraion of rules when his mother talks about her job in the Department of Justice.
In conclusion
EA 2.1 Compare/Contrast Rubric
Rubric Categories
Exemplary, 4
Proficient, 3
Emerging, 2
Incomplete, 1
Ideas 1
maintains a focused thesis in response to one of the prompts
responds to one of the prompts with a clear thesis
has an unclear or unrelated thesis
The essay
has no obvious thesis
Ideas2
develops ideas thoroughly with relevant supporting details, facts, and evidence
develops ideas adequately with supporting details, facts, and evidence
develops ideas unevenly or with inadequate supporting details, facts, or evidence
provides minimal supporting details, facts, or evidence
Ideas3
provides insightful commentary and deep analysis
provides sufficient commentary...
